My Christmas gift came early this year. It isn’t a
subscription to the Loeb Classical Library (although I would be very grateful
for this). And it isn’t Amazon’s Alexa , or the new MacBook Pro. It’s an email.
Before I reveal the contents, I think it would be helpful to
give some backstory. I have been blessed to be able to get to know many
wonderful students over 30 years in education. Many have taught me things about
how to be a better person and how to become someone who wants to create
positive change in myself and in my community. Put simply, every year I get
inspired by what these students say in person or Skype, write in emails and
essays, and most importantly, do while still in secondary school or college.
They know education will help them achieve their goals and
they are willing to work hard to reach high and far, even though they also know that they might
not get exactly want they want. They do, however, believe that there is some
truth to the clichés that the journey matters more than the final destination and that the experience of trying is itself
transformative. But my mouthing these abstractions only makes their experiences sound trite. They aren’t. Many
of the students I know are willing to travel across the world to seek out the
opportunities that they might not have at home. They sacrifice comfort and a
home culture in favor of a global education. Parents sacrifice not just huge
sums of money but also the opportunity to see their children more than once or
twice a year.
But when it comes to international students more often than not
the stories in the media are negative or focus solely on the money they bring to colleges and communities in the US. The negative press tends to focus on
students from Asian given that the vast majority of students who come to the US
are from that part of the world. The stories over the last several years about
cheating on standardized tests and the use of of education agents who
manufacture transcripts and essays has made to many in education suspicious or
downright forthrightly judgmental of anyone coming from Asia, especially
certain countries (China and Korea).
I have said this before, but it is worth repeating--the
students I know and work with are some of the best I have ever met from
anywhere. I have worked with honors students and merit scholar winners and know
what good is in terms of students getting into top 10 colleges; many of the
ones who I interact with belong in this group. I am not just talking about
numbers, although many of them have nearly perfect grades on transcripts and top1%
scores on standardized tests. What
stands out about many of the students is not the numbers, but the approach they have to living and learning.
These students are hungry—they want to learn, want to explore. They are, in
other words, the opposite what many think when it comes to students from
Asia—test takers who lack imagination and character.
As a result, of some of these negative stereotypes and as a
result of the limitations placed on the number of international students
admitted to the most selective schools (most of the top 30 schools have about
10% of the student body from other places than the US), the competition forspots is far greater than for most in the US. It should not be a surprise that these students look
for help in learning more about how to apply to schools outside of their countries. In many cases In their home country
a single exam determines one’s fate when it comes to university placement. Writing essays, resumes, and doing
interviews is literally a foreign concept. That’s where people like me come
in. Some of these students reach out to people who have experience in admission
and who can help them understand what the process is that goes into ‘holistic’
evaluations. Most also need help understanding what a personal statement is
since this is not something they have ever written before.
What I do with students is what some (me included) would
call an intensive tutorial. Over a period of time I work with students on
learning how to improve their writing, critical thinking and pragmatic goal setting . Obviously, each
student is different, but in most cases this involves a
lot of discussion and a lot of rewrites. By the time a student hits submit on
the Common Application (or other form) she usually has spent many hours writing
a personal statement and other essays that many highly selective schools
require. But here is where things get complicated at least from the perspective
of how some perceive these tutorials.
For critics of people who help students to apply to highly selective universities and colleges one
of the biggest issues is that students who come from advantaged backgrounds
have access to resources that others don’t.
This of course is true-- students whose parents have the money to help their children navigate the complexities of applying to university in a different
country and culture are at an advantage compared to those who do not have the
resources. And in some ways these students are given an advantage over some US students who don’t have the resources to get help. (It is worth noting that some
international students have no college counselors in their schools, so either they
get help from outside professions or no help at all.) There is more focus on
the vast differences between the haves and have nots in the US and around the
world these days. I wish I could say things are going to get better, but I am
not optimistic overall or in the world of education. On the other hand, I
cannot see that students who request help should be held to higher standards or
automatically rejected because they are perceived as having getting too much
help.
And this “too much” is what I think deserves a bit of ideological
unpacking. At what point does help become too much help? Is any extra help,
because all do not have access, too much? I would hope that most would not
agree with this all or nothing definition. On the other hand, almost all would
agree that completely creating or rewriting essays and creating
a fake resume for students is also not right. But what constitutes an acceptable
middle? I won’t pretend to have the correct answer. All I can do is try to outline
what I think works well for me and the students and then ask for feedback about
whether I am wrong in my approach.
I know that I ask students to do a lot of thinking and a lot
of writing. I also give a lot of feedback. Feedback is a nice way of saying
criticism. I will praise things, but mostly what I am trying to do is challenge
them. While to some students this might
sound like living in a fairly low circle in Dante’s hell, most students actually end up thinking it’s kind
of fun (or at least not overly painful). No matter how they feel, however, when
all's said and done, the students will be more prepared to do well in classes
at university. This is ultimately my goal. I don’t care about which schools they
go to as there are plenty of great places. I do care about helping them learn
to question things including the way they see the world and communicate what
they see to others.
This interaction with students is what gets me up early and keeps me up late. I get
to learn from students who have insights into topics and themselves that I would
not have ever had been exposed to were we not connected. Does all this back and
forth change the student’s voice? I certainly hope so. Does it make the voice more
persuasive and effective? I certainly hope so. That is what a teacher is
supposed to do. But is this too much help? Don’t all the schools advise
students to use their own voice? Is a 17
year supposed to trust in his or her own voice and not let others teach them
about how we are all composed of voices in the plural and all of us can improve
our voices with practice and feedback? I
am biased, of course, but to me this help only seems positive; to others, it is
blatantly unfair. What do you think?
All of which brings me back to my Christmas gift. Here is
what a student who was recently offered early admission to her dream school
wrote upon hearing the good news (she gave me permission to quote her):
Good news! I received an offer
from….(name withheld)!!! 😃😃😃
Thank
you very much for your help during these three months!💪💪💪
I
think these past three-months are really a valuable learning experience. I
learned a lot about writing: I practiced how to write a good narrative in
English, learned how to communicate my thoughts clearly in English, and become
aware of how well I can write, and thus
became more confident about my writing.
Writing
all these essays has been tough, but with you as a reliable guide, the tough
task became interesting when I found the essays are gradually improved by
better word choice and beautiful metaphors... I think much of my future
learning will follow a similar pattern. This has been one of my best
college-preparation courses.
As a teacher, it would be hard to
ask for any better feedback from a student. I am so grateful to her for sending
this to me. I need, however, to describe what it was like to work with her. She
has wonderful ideas about topics and things she has done that are creative, but
they were hard to describe. We spent a lot of
time trying to figure out how to turn an art project into words that would get
across the colors and unique approach she took (I will post this essay at some
point as a part of my essay test series). But as with her visual art she takes
every word as seriously as her choice of colors and brushstrokes. She wants
every word to count. When the November 1 Early Decision deadline approached,
she’d completed 20+ drafts. I know very few students who would put this much effort
into writing. Her willingness to do this already convinced me she will be a
success, not just in school, but long after too. She takes pride in her work and
is willing to do what it takes to get it the way she thinks it should be. We
occasionally had discussions and even
disagreements about word choice and idiomatic usage, but mostly we simply
exchanged ideas about details and narrative approaches. The skills she
developed came out of her effort and her willingness to take constructive criticism.
But now I want to
return to my previous question. Does all our work together constitute too much
help? If so, why and when did it cross
the line? I would argue that our work helped her discover her voice --the one
that is better than the one she had before we worked together. Is this an
unfair advantage and if schools knew that she had received this tutorial would
or should they use the information against her and if so why? I do hope the people who think what I do to
help these wonderful students is ethically wrong will respond in concrete ways
to help persuade me to mend my ways. But my real hope is that in describing the
way some of us work with students will make educators more open to encouraging
students to develop their talents and voices.
We have coaches for sports and that seems to be fine with most. Why does
coaching writing for someone seem less ethical? Is what I
have written self-serving? Yes. So be it.
For now I am going to enjoy my
present and share in the happiness this student has for achieving a goal she
worked so hard to achieve.
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